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24th Sep 2014, 12:00 AM in Chapter 2- Happy Birthday
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Fluffythespider 24th Sep 2014, 12:00 AM edit delete
I will include the original version of this chapter all together once the updated version is completed. That way you will be able to understand what my old comments are referring to, as seen below.

I had a bit of extra time, so I decided to add some color. I think it makes it look less horrible, especially since the word bubbles are defined, but I probably won't have time to color them all if I want to keep charging ahead with 2 and 3 page updates. Or the coloring would be minimal, like in the last panel. I don't know if that would be better than nothing, so I guess we'll find out on Sunday.

I don't know why, but the final product looks better than the sketch for once.